Thirty-Second Class Period: Peer Critiquing Body Paragraph 1

Students were to come to class with the rough draft of their first body paragraph for their film analysis essay. Students used a peer critique sheet to guide them in evaluating the rough draft of a classmate's first body paragraph. Students were to complete a second expository body paragraph prewriting chart in preparation for drafting the second paragraph of their film analysis essay. Homework: Revise the first paragraph of the film analysis essay and draft the second paragraph. During the next class, Mr. Stone will be checking for a second completed prewriting table, a draft of a second body paragraph, and a revised first body paragraph. He will ask students to show him the changes they made to their first paragraphs.